Friday, July 24, 2009

Revision Heroics

It's reporting day! Hip...hip! Head over to Holly's and let everyone know how this week has gone for you.

I think I wrote somewhere (at some time) that I finished my revision. I FINISHED MY REVISION. Wheee! And now that I've passed it on to trusted readers, I'm already thinking of other things that I need to do.

But I cracked the whip. I accomplished my goal. And that makes me feel I have super natural whip crackin' power. Oh yeah!





The Strange Supersonic Whip Lash!

How appropriate. And hubby just said, "Hey, that does look like you." But I had to remind him that my tummy will never look that tight again...you know, having our two babies and all. But I do hope I cracked the whip with firm yet angelic care.

There's lots and lots of these cool super heroes out there, courtesy of The Hero Factory. Check out Holly's, I think we make quite a heroic revision team.

6 comments:

BJW said...

Love it. Though, where's the cute puppy at her feet?

WHERPLASH! Now it's official. Yours, Holly's and Amy's super alter egos all have whips. I am whipped. From every side!

storyqueen said...

Congratulations! It feels great when a revision gets finished.

Good luck!

Shelley

holly cupala said...

Smack-tabulous! She looks like she would kick your bum in the sweetest possible way. HOORAY for finishing the revision! Wonder twin powers!

Jennie Englund said...

What will you do with all your free time? Start another book?

Are you so happy with the revision?

Does it seem a lot stronger?

Congrats!

Cuppa Jolie said...

Ben...someone's got to make you finish that book already. If it takes whips from all sides...so be it! :)

Thanks, storyqueen and Holly!

Jennie...free time? What free time? I'm busier than ever. I have a work-in-progress that I need to crank on, but other things have been sucking up much of my attention. But I definitely have goals to get through an outline(painful...and something I've never done before)for book 2.

I made pretty big changes in this revision (combining two characters) and I do think its stronger.

-karen ann. said...

yes, you know how to wield that whip. i won't let that pink leotard fool me for one minute. btw, super cute!